Choice to run for the MPN.

Small cell Posts : 8 Join date : 2009-11-14

I need to know if any of these are worthy for rallying everyone's support.

Choice to run for the MPN. EarthP

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

You will need to improve on the color also you may want to add more details the creations to makew them look more outstanding.

Small cell Posts : 8 Join date : 2009-11-14

Which one specifically? The adventure they are made for won't be released for a while so I'd like to focus only on the one that will make the MPN for now.

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

The 3rd one has the largest potential
I'm summoning the members back.

Small cell Posts : 8 Join date : 2009-11-14

I really don't know what to do to improve it though...

Subject: Re: Choice to run for the MPN. 21/11/2009, 7:12 pm

I think the legs are pretty skinney. Like their legs would snap under the body weight. I'd use the organic limbs instaes of exo. And the color looks a bit plain. But I understand that they're in early production. I like the winged one the most

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

Update people.I have been banned from the sporum.Well they accused Biohazard of being a downrater so I showed up and tell them I'm a downrater with all my friends.At least I don't need that forum.

Small cell Posts : 8 Join date : 2009-11-14

Biohazard98 wrote:: I think the legs are pretty skinney. Like their legs would snap under the body weight. I'd use the organic limbs instaes of exo. And the color looks a bit plain. But I understand that they're in early production. I like the winged one the most

It's a living puppet. It's supposed to look limp. It floats anyway.

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

Okay then try to improve the color to make it look more realistic.

Subject: Re: Choice to run for the MPN. 21/11/2009, 8:53 pm

I think another way to improve it would be to do something a little more with the head and the colors.

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

Good idea maybe like a ragdoll

Small cell Posts : 8 Join date : 2009-11-14

I was pretty sure the colors were fine o_O

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

The style is a bit too bland

Small cell Posts : 8 Join date : 2009-11-14

Well, it's supposed to be watery. Straight blue wasn't working so I changed to cyan and I think it works pretty well.

Small cell Posts : 11 Join date : 2009-11-15 Age : 35

If i could i will present those for the Mpn :

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-genphilboubou|2267387342%3Asast-500487617889

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-genphilboubou|2267387342%3Asast-500442293473%3Apg-40

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-genphilboubou|2267387342%3Asast-500450123946%3Apg-40

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=advasrch-gaulois%3Afi-name%2Cauthor%2Ctags%2Cdescription%3Afu-CREATURE%2CTRIBE_CREATURE%2CCIV_CREATURE%2CSPACE_CREATURE%2CADVENTURE_CREATURE%2CCITY_HALL%2CHOUSE%2CINDUSTRY%2CENTERTAINMENT%2CUFO%2CADV_ATTACK%2CADV_COLLECT%2CADV_DEFEND%2CADV_EXPLORE%2CADV_UNSET%2CADV_PUZZLE%2CADV_QUEST%2CADV_SOCIALIZE%2CADV_STORY%2CADV_TEMPLATE%3Am-LAND%2CAIR%2CWATER%3Ap-MILITARY%2CECONOMIC%2CCULTURAL%2CCOLONY%3Afl-NONE

Thanks in advance for the Feedback on those creation .

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

The color should be richer like those of coppers creations.
Grn those are definately worth and I shot on MPN but the second one could use a better placement of details.

Subject: Re: Choice to run for the MPN. 22/11/2009, 4:47 pm

Jat371 wrote:

Biohazard98 wrote:: I think the legs are pretty skinney. Like their legs would snap under the body weight. I'd use the organic limbs instaes of exo. And the color looks a bit plain. But I understand that they're in early production. I like the winged one the most

It's a living puppet. It's supposed to look limp. It floats anyway.

Wait, why did they accuse me anyway?

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

Someone framed us.
They would have banned you if I didn't show up and get banned instead.
http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/6960/40741.page
look at the last post.
I really trashed my rep this round.

Small cell Posts : 11 Join date : 2009-11-15 Age : 35

thanks a lot for the feedback

Subject: Re: Choice to run for the MPN. 22/11/2009, 8:14 pm

If it's supposed to be a puppet you should make it have "strings" made out of exo

Subject: Re: Choice to run for the MPN. 23/11/2009, 5:23 pm

You could also use the asymetry to make it look like the puppet is dancing or something also.

Admin Posts : 1229 Join date : 2009-04-23 Age : 29

Good idea that should help bring the puppets value up.

Small cell Posts : 19 Join date : 2009-11-24

To be honest I think your puppets need more unique detailing. No offence, but that is just very simple outfitting using masks as masks, shoulderpads as shoulderpads, etc. Think out of the box is my advice. Keep turning and twisting parts until you get some unique new look.

btw, do I need to post here if I wish to go for mpn?

Small cell Posts : 19 Join date : 2009-11-24

Btw, since I'm new let me introduce some of my work so you all can decide wether or not to respect my tips and advice Smile

This is my latest creature/mech called MI1 tankbuster. Uprate it if you like Smile

]http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-MjrGlory%7C2263152622%3Asast-500494503123

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Subject: Re: Choice to run for the MPN. 24/11/2009, 1:26 pm

MjrGlory wrote:: Btw, since I'm new let me introduce some of my work so you all can decide wether or not to respect my tips and advice
This is my latest creature/mech called MI1 tankbuster. Uprate it if you like

]http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-MjrGlory%7C2263152622%3Asast-500494503123

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Awesome creations!