Choice to run for the MPN.

I need to know if any of these are worthy for rallying everyone's support.

You will need to improve on the color also you may want to add more details the creations to makew them look more outstanding.

Which one specifically? The adventure they are made for won't be released for a while so I'd like to focus only on the one that will make the MPN for now.

The 3rd one has the largest potential
I'm summoning the members back.

I really don't know what to do to improve it though...

I think the legs are pretty skinney. Like their legs would snap under the body weight. I'd use the organic limbs instaes of exo. And the color looks a bit plain. But I understand that they're in early production. I like the winged one the most

Update people.I have been banned from the sporum.Well they accused Biohazard of being a downrater so I showed up and tell them I'm a downrater with all my friends.At least I don't need that forum.

Biohazard98 wrote:

I think the legs are pretty skinney. Like their legs would snap under the body weight. I'd use the organic limbs instaes of exo. And the color looks a bit plain. But I understand that they're in early production. I like the winged one the most

It's a living puppet. It's supposed to look limp. It floats anyway.

Okay then try to improve the color to make it look more realistic.

I think another way to improve it would be to do something a little more with the head and the colors.

Good idea maybe like a ragdoll

I was pretty sure the colors were fine o_O

The style is a bit too bland

Well, it's supposed to be watery. Straight blue wasn't working so I changed to cyan and I think it works pretty well.

If i could i will present those for the Mpn :

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-genphilboubou|2267387342%3Asast-500487617889

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-genphilboubou|2267387342%3Asast-500442293473%3Apg-40

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-genphilboubou|2267387342%3Asast-500450123946%3Apg-40

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=advasrch-gaulois%3Afi-name%2Cauthor%2Ctags%2Cdescription%3Afu-CREATURE%2CTRIBE_CREATURE%2CCIV_CREATURE%2CSPACE_CREATURE%2CADVENTURE_CREATURE%2CCITY_HALL%2CHOUSE%2CINDUSTRY%2CENTERTAINMENT%2CUFO%2CADV_ATTACK%2CADV_COLLECT%2CADV_DEFEND%2CADV_EXPLORE%2CADV_UNSET%2CADV_PUZZLE%2CADV_QUEST%2CADV_SOCIALIZE%2CADV_STORY%2CADV_TEMPLATE%3Am-LAND%2CAIR%2CWATER%3Ap-MILITARY%2CECONOMIC%2CCULTURAL%2CCOLONY%3Afl-NONE

Thanks in advance for the Feedback on those creation .

The color should be richer like those of coppers creations.
Grn those are definately worth and I shot on MPN but the second one could use a better placement of details.

Jat371 wrote:

Biohazard98 wrote:

I think the legs are pretty skinney. Like their legs would snap under the body weight. I'd use the organic limbs instaes of exo. And the color looks a bit plain. But I understand that they're in early production. I like the winged one the most

It's a living puppet. It's supposed to look limp. It floats anyway.

Wait, why did they accuse me anyway?

Someone framed us.
They would have banned you if I didn't show up and get banned instead.
http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/6960/40741.page
look at the last post.
I really trashed my rep this round.

thanks a lot for the feedback

If it's supposed to be a puppet you should make it have "strings" made out of exo

You could also use the asymetry to make it look like the puppet is dancing or something also.

Good idea that should help bring the puppets value up.

To be honest I think your puppets need more unique detailing. No offence, but that is just very simple outfitting using masks as masks, shoulderpads as shoulderpads, etc. Think out of the box is my advice. Keep turning and twisting parts until you get some unique new look.


btw, do I need to post here if I wish to go for mpn?

Btw, since I'm new let me introduce some of my work so you all can decide wether or not to respect my tips and advice
This is my latest creature/mech called MI1 tankbuster. Uprate it if you like

]http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-MjrGlory%7C2263152622%3Asast-500494503123

[url=https://servimg.com/view/14577109/1][/url

MjrGlory wrote:

Btw, since I'm new let me introduce some of my work so you all can decide wether or not to respect my tips and advice
This is my latest creature/mech called MI1 tankbuster. Uprate it if you like

]http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-MjrGlory%7C2263152622%3Asast-500494503123

[url=https://servimg.com/view/14577109/1][/url

Awesome creations!